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| + | You need to include more content in Chapter 1 and reorganize it. | ||
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| + | You should start from the standpoint of trying to explain your work to your daughter and then end with information directed towards the Ph.D. committee. | ||
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| + | For example, you should introduce the concept of ionization in the first Chapter but a detailed description of how fission fragments will produce a signal in the GEM fission chamber is presented in the Simulations chapter. | ||
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| + | After describing ionization chambers and GEM foils in general you would move onto fission chambers and then neutron detection in Chapter 1. | ||
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| + | An introductory paragraph can lay out the contents of Chapter 1 in order to lead into the description contained in Chapter 1. | ||
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| + | You could move energy loss by charged particles into the Simualtion chapter. | ||
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Latest revision as of 20:47, 17 April 2015
30/25/14
On Thu, Mar 27, 2014 at 10:09 AM, Tony Forest <foretony@isu.edu> wrote:
Haitham:
You need to include more content in Chapter 1 and reorganize it.
You should start from the standpoint of trying to explain your work to your daughter and then end with information directed towards the Ph.D. committee.
For example, you should introduce the concept of ionization in the first Chapter but a detailed description of how fission fragments will produce a signal in the GEM fission chamber is presented in the Simulations chapter.
After describing ionization chambers and GEM foils in general you would move onto fission chambers and then neutron detection in Chapter 1.
An introductory paragraph can lay out the contents of Chapter 1 in order to lead into the description contained in Chapter 1.
You could move energy loss by charged particles into the Simualtion chapter.
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